Nice heaven song. But you asked for a critic, so, it's a bit slow, the triangle carries on when you go the restart, you could make it a bit longer and give it more of a "heaven's waiting room" feel.
I only said all of that because you asked for a critic.
Ahh, thank you for the critic, i must say though that this isn't going to be a loop and is nowhere near finished (that's why its so short). I'll take that its to slow into consideration though!
Why does everything better than what I did/have ALWAYS inspire me?!!?!?!?!?!?
Why would you be inspired by something that sucks? That would be like the eyptians constructing a colossal pyramid and then they see some guy pile a couple rocks on each other and they're all inspired.
I am waiting for this completed epicness!
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