Here's just a quick something that I put together. It's a cover of an XM of the same name by Glenn Rune Gallefoss. The only thing I don't quite like about it is the lead. I'm no good at making instruments, but keep in mind i'm only 13.
i voted 'GOOD', because it is really good. I love the instruments, the drums, and especially the ending. It's kind of a jam, more than a memorable/hummable melody. Sounds like jazz improv?