A time ago a made a sort of cave story cover I now found again. I decided to make a little remix, I'm currently working on it
i have only one question
why is this not finished i need the finished version.
The only criticism I can give is that the intro melody from frame 03 onwards isn't similar to the original at all. While yours goes "A D A D G# D G# D" etc etc, the original goes "D# G# D# G# D G# D G#" and so on. I'm not sure whether you meant to make it different, but the way it fitted in makes it sound like you want it to be like the original.
This whole thing has a lot of quirk - and I really like it! That lead instrument you use always sounds nice.
Since it is a remix I can do whatever I want to :D
I wasn't saying it was bad - it sounds good on its own merit! It just sounded like that, with the progression of the song, you wanted to go back to the song's roots.