Whoa, an original thing... and it doesn't sound half bad either, if I do say so myself. Pretty shocking on all ends. I'm not done with it yet - I'd like to make it a real song; have a proper ending and everything, but I've done a lot of work on it for today so I'll throw it up here for critique and whatnot.
The original concept was to have a slow, steady pulse throughout the song (kinda like a cardiac monitor; maybe subconsciously inspired by Healing Vision?), so I'd like to keep Pulse 1 going as-is... but I'm not sure if I'll end the song like I originally intended to, with a slowdown followed by the pulse "flatlining." We'll see where it takes me, I guess.