Hey, this is actually not even half bad! The only thing I would personally change is the volume of the bleepy sound effects made with instrument B but other than that, it's a cool little tune!

Hello and welcome to the Famitracker Forum

Actually, this track is rather amazing. There are a lot of newcomers with high hopes, but low experience. This track is done pretty well, I like the melody, the effects and channel usages are pretty good (although the volume balance is a little off, nothing major) and this track is just very fun to listen to .
Just one tip: Try and name your instruments. If there's a mistake in there you can't find, no one will dig into fifty bazillion "New Instrument"s. ^^

Good luck with famitracker and best of luck :D